Instruction: Change Word (CS) Wrong Character (WC) Wrong Sentence Structure (WSS) Wrong Measure Word (WMW) Eliminate Word (EW) Change Word Order (CWO) Add Word (AD) Add Character (AC) Eliminate Character (EC)
Please note changes made right after the wrong character or sentence. (e.g. 我的朋友有的ec一支笔。The correct way is 我的朋友有一支笔。) The overall comment is in the end of the revised essay.
Instruction:
답글삭제Change Word (CS) Wrong Character (WC) Wrong Sentence Structure (WSS) Wrong Measure Word (WMW) Eliminate Word (EW) Change Word Order (CWO) Add Word (AD) Add Character (AC) Eliminate Character (EC)
Please note changes made right after the wrong character or sentence. (e.g. 我的朋友有的ec一支笔。The correct way is 我的朋友有一支笔。)
The overall comment is in the end of the revised essay.
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답글삭제为了庆祝朋友的生日，我买了一瓶香水。香水瓶是用玻璃做的，它的容量是60毫升。虽然玻
답글삭제璃瓶一般来说易碎，但这香水的玻璃瓶摸着像石头一样硬，以cw(可以)安全地保管液体ac（状）的香水。另外，香
水的用途不但是cw（可以）美容的ec，这种香水的香而且ew闻着甜得像糖似的，就cw（可以）强调女性性cw（美），结果ew香水的盒子
是深粉红色的，盒子上放满着cw（了）花的图案。透明的香水玻璃瓶也加强香水对女性顾客的魅力cw（吸引）。总
之，香水盒子跟玻璃瓶给人又光滑又细腻的感觉。